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Moonlight spills over grass cooled by dew
Each blade lit by light so unwavering, so true.
Wrapped in a cloak of Nature’s tears,
Your touch brushes away all my fears.
The fiery caress of your hands
Brings my world to slowly, slowly expand
To encompass the whisper of music. And you.

The shimmering opal of the moon,
Against sapphire brilliance, star strewn,
Does nothing to dim the radiance of your eyes.
Your hand laced in mine, bound only by endless skies,
Embraced by grass, surrounded by notes
Quavering drops of molten gold, drifting as dust motes
Trembling, floating beneath the luminous moon.

Light summer rain washes down, almost unnoticed
Enveloping our world in a sheet of mist
An ethereal land, with a beauty so delicate
Surrounded by a flickering silver haze moonlit.
And you laughed and drew me up, and we ran
Children no longer, yet bound by summer, whose spell spanned
Alluring, irresistibly sweet, and we walked, willing, into its midst.

And in your beautiful, beautiful eyes
I see summer eternal, and music which flies
Soars, dips and wheels, like a phoenix, the bird of fire
An immortal tribute to the burning of desire.
And nestled in your tender, gentle embrace
Washed with Nature’s purity, blessed with the moon’s grace
Caressed by music, watched by summer stars, beneath the sweeping skies.
©2006-2009 ~burnisbetter
:iconburnisbetter:

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It's Valentine's Day, and my English teacher made us all write love poems. Some of them were really good too...
I wrote this in like, half an hour.

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:iconts-waz:
Oh yay! A title! I've told you what I thought of it before.

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Lack of communication leads to 90% of all problems. (the other causes being 5% magic & 5% giant robots)
:iconkiritsubo:
It's pretty. ^_^ I like it.
I'm terrible at writing poems, as you know. *cough*sugarpoisoningpoem*cough*

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"I'm sorry.
for acting without your consent
I just wanted to help you.
If I could die for you
nothing would make me happier..."
-Gazette
translation of "Zakurogata no Yuutsu"
:iconburnisbetter:
Haha, you know that was an awesome poem!
:iconkiritsubo:
....you know, I think you're the only one who thought that...

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"I'm sorry.
for acting without your consent
I just wanted to help you.
If I could die for you
nothing would make me happier..."
-Gazette
translation of "Zakurogata no Yuutsu"
:iconburnisbetter:
Well, sugar poisoning was so much fun. And you know it.
:iconspiritdew:
oh my god.

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nya. so true.
:iconburnisbetter:
You didn't even read it!
:iconspiritdew:
uhm. >_> but i was still amazed. i could just tell by the way it started and looked. ._. still am.

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nya. so true.
:iconburnisbetter:
Lol. It was just... long? It actually wasn't that hard to write.
OMG. Kansas City is like, almost tomorrow. It'll be tomorrow tomorrow though. I am SO excited!!! I need to get out of school. I'm like failing everything right now anyway, I can't pay attention.

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